Grace, an advanced ESL student, is revising a argument essay for a college placement writing sample in 2024. The essay is about mobile clinic reminders. The writer's purpose is to argue that health clinics should match reminders to patients' access to phones and internet service.
Draft excerpt:
(1) Argue that health clinics should match reminders to patients' access to phones and internet service. (2) The draft needs clear organization, accurate word choice, varied sentence patterns, and control of grammar. (3) Missed visits declined only after the clinic offered both text reminders and automated voice calls in the patient's preferred language. (4) The waiting-room magazines were removed in 2020. (5) The revision should keep the focus on the main point while using standard written English.
Which sentence uses the correct preposition?
