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A draft paragraph argues that campus food trucks should be allowed near evening classes. One sentence describes the history of food trucks in Los Angeles. Another cites a student survey about hunger after 6 p.m. Which revision best improves focus?
Remove or relocate the Los Angeles history sentence unless it directly explains the campus proposal.
Remove the student survey because local student hunger is too narrow for a policy argument.
Add a paragraph on food-truck design trends before discussing evening classes.
Replace the claim with a general statement that food culture is diverse.
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